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Voted For: Tekneek

This guys technique for rappin is just copy and paste
Tekneek dont win he just PM for votes, man he a waste
aight
Man the only way ull win is if he used his birthday wishes for wishin
Man ill cut ur hopes and dreams wit certain precision like a circumcision
weak punch
U hide ur real skill like a bald man in denial who wears a fuckin toupee
Ill leave ur tekneek dead wit one spray, he’ll be losin in any other way
not really a punch
U Got a 3-0 record and ima bout to give him his first loss to his rec.
U aint capable of goin against me newbie so next time just get it correct
not really a punch here, either

First taste of real gladiator, serve him like irate wasted waiters, end up with 10 digits on your face like basic calculators…
Tek call's out all imitators, you ‘outta line’ like ‘illiterate narrators’ and couldn’t catch a beat packin rhyme defibrillators.
weak opener
Hope ya religious, it over before its finished,.u can’t win this, cuz Tek throw shots puttin death on this bitches wish list..
You just miss kid, and Tek leave ya showered wit disses, it could be your birthday and you still couldn’t come gifted…
aight
Bring wack spits and get ripped with apocalyptic tactics, show him the end is near like naive Vietnam draft pics…
Rhymes is plastic, kid ain’t severe, he anti-climatic, bitch couldn’t ‘match up’ sparkin phosphorous fabrics…
ok
This tha true test, tek chew vets and leave crews vexed, beat ya dome with texts and leave em wit loose necks
This fools next, show who’s best when head smacks through chest, left this kid noddin like he was sayin ooh-yes…
decent

Pen N’ Paper.. ur punches need help here though.. like 2 bars weren’t
Really punches.. and the rest were just not hittin hard enuff.. so work
On that.. add some personals up in there.. to make the battle a little bit
More interesting to read n’ shit.. but overall for you.. elevate on your
Punches though..

Tekneek.. first of all.. fix your fucking structure.. I haven’t seen a
Stretched structure since.. last year around this damn time.. your
Punches need improving.. cause a couple of them weren’t connecting
So, work on that also.. & add some personals in your rhymes too