Banned: Biting
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IP:
ok this is pretty good for a newb, i like the wordplay. the structure threw me off but nonethe less, this was ok. i would have like to see the lines of this piece leveled, but write now its all over the place, i would preffer to see this in a center text, so that i can actually read it poetically. but this was ok. 6/10
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