Voted For: Payn

Here's my vote and some simple constructive critism

i lost you near the end Payn but your flow was desent ur lines definitely more creative then DZK_BURYMORE . . .word of advice to DZK when u battle don't just simple ryme make sure you going somewhere . . . and Payn love the metaphors . . . Good shit guys . . .



the one and only
flowverse

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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff