Voted For: GKillaz05
Haha let me sum it up then Im gonna break it down:
GKilla got this one for me, structure on point, rhymes cracked me up...Smoove alrite punches didnt hit hard enuf.... lets break it down:
smoove:
You’re the worst GK.. but face it.. your text is dormant
& when GK hits the pad.. he uses extra absorbent
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Good opener, good punch, decent hit.....3/5
Stay pounding you w/ these punches.. & I’ll crack the mold
But your verse has more dots n’ dashes..
..than Morse codes
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I see what ure sayin but its not really a diss rite...1/5
In text your weak.. plus.. your punches amount to shit
GK soils his pants.. he added water & created a rain forest
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Aiite got me a laughin a bit..4/5
You kind of remind me of Jay-Z – out there wrecking the sales
Also.. minus the flow, album hype, plus everything else
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ahaha....GOOD...best u dun 4/5
Your not a very good employee.. so I’m about to give you the boot
& your sitting at your computer.. surfing the net.. wearing a wet-suit
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NO....didnt feel that...1/5
Your so whack, you might as well check-in and not spit...
I'll set your toilet on fire, just so you got hot shit...
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sick opener HAHA...great start...4/5
Your winnin' streak ima stop it, Kid get ready to lose...
fuck kinda name is Smoove?.. musta been drinkin' booze...
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Sorry not feelin this..1/5..think its a played concept
All your lyrics hear is boo's.. like there were ghosts...
Wanted 2 prewrite his verse so he ignored all my posts...
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Aiite punch but didnt hit too hard...3/5
Your raps are burnt like toast, no one whould bite it...
Wouldnt be surprised if you got your mother to write it...
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HAHA.....another cracker...good shit...4/5
Gettin' all excited like a dog, about to piss yourself...
Rhymes are retarded... when you spit you diss yourself...
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BEST LINE......5/5.....hot shit man....well done Gkilla
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