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Voted For: .Murdz.
HAHAHA at the last line murdz......he took this easy..no need to break down...
Murdz: Good sturcture, good worldplay and multies.....I dont see many multies in battles that work but this here did work and very good job....also good punches
best line:
you think you the greatest?...nigga you aint quite foolin me
My verses are so good ya family hired me to write ya eulogie!!!
SNE Dawg:
Your verse lacked hard punches, it had self glorification and it was weak, not feelin it atall dawg, elevate loads in battles...~RTF LINK IN SIG~
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