Voted For: J.Terror


Your never slaying-a-prey, bitch your better off saying-a-prayer
Because ya punches always"miss"- sorta like nun teaching careers
^^^OK.....didn''t like the first line
He's an obese chick witha temper,da way he's hoping to toss my salads
Olny chance at winning, is zip lockin my breath or rigging site ballots
^^nah...this one suked
Inflictin punishments with pens, punches got dude airbourne like pilots
Only way peoples gonna b "number 1" is at the library "asking for silence"
^^OK
You could look in mirrors underwater-& still not reflect nice flow
Batterring this pussy without feet in the air, like battling female nympo's
^^^Nice
Pre's a crack head in a sand storm, the way his "dope lines" never land
I'l discipline this bitch, even tho his battle wins are always "out-of-hand"
^^Nice

Well....you had some nice lines in this.The best one was the 2nd one.Water/flow jokes are played out.Flow was Ok in this.

His name J.Terror, he scares nobody, he wack yo/
When its beef, he like sugar, cuz he lac-tose//
^^OK
He from the Caribbean, y'all ever heard of this lame?/
J. talkin?,I'ma wipe out the Caribbean,my guns like hurricanes//
^^^OK
So J. are u scared or what ?/
Cuz I take ya bitch and J. please believe I'ma Ter-ror up//
^^what the hell....1st line so short...2nd so long.But a Nice punch.
J.Terror ain't hot, that's why he said he a Free Agent/
J. yo flow basic, jus face, bro, u ain't sick//
^^^didn't rhmye,and u area free agent too
He like to smoke but can he rap/
On this mini track I smoked him like 20 sack//
^^floed good,but whack

Well....this was waay better than the verse you posted against me.If you had kept ur lines the same lenght and wrote it differently.....you would have gotten this shit mad easy.But you had some lines with 4 words ....then the line after was line 20.Can';t do dat.Look how J. Terror wrote his lines.But you had some nice werdplay.Just didn't do it right.

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