Voted For: Stanza

This Dude Is Lyrically Capable Of Nuttin So Ill Jus Watch Him Easily Rot
Maybe One Day he'll Get Ghanarea in His Ass So His Shit Can Really Be Hot
^^OK
This dude Been a Free Agent For A While Now and He still Aint Been Got
Man Ill Pack Your Punchez In a Cooler.........or Ill Just put Yo P's in a Pot
^^^OK
You Gone Die Over The Net With My Punchez Taking Over These Curves
You From Detroit?....so You Never be The Champ Like My Name was Spurs
^^very uncreative

Well 2 punches were OK....not spectacular.....but OK.That last one is as uncreative as it gets.But u didn't need to come hard.U ripped this cat easily.


ima punch em and watchs-My-Fist-Morph and leave em Scared-With-My-Shits-Gore//
so dont you notice? "Stanza A Small Threat" like TERRORIST DWARVES//.....Haha
^^whack....why say haha at end?
ill Stash-Ya-In-Crates cus im like "Comedian Pophets" ill bring Laughter-To-Your-Fate//
I dont even have to Ask-Ya-Fake cuz truth is "ill leave ya on your knees" like my bitches After-A-Date//
^^wat ya date gotta do with this battle
Im Raw-With-Such Scripts Ta Make U Crawl-With-Cuts//
cuz even if i "Tied" u to a "Fist, Stencil" u still couldnt Draw-A-Punch!!!//
^^^whack

Next time try not to stretch ur lines out.Structure ur shit better so it's looks better.It was ugly.Ur punches suck and I dun have to say why because ur verse says it all.

Vote-Stanza(vote in link below please)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196531