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Voted For: Jack The Ripper
jakc so go this one man
he came with wittier punches, had a bit of personals....not really, since he didn't really know his opponent.........but he still had ahardre hitting punches....k-trini, gotta wrok on wordplay, and ways to make your punches sound better/ come accross clearer...you have poor vocab and flow, which makes your verse souned cheesey and stupid
jack, i liked you pucnehs, really creative and new to the game,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,and originalilty and creativilty is good to have, so keep u[p and keep expanding your skills
v/jack the ripper
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