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Old 06-26-05, 01:57 AM   #26
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Voted For: Jack The Ripper

jakc so go this one man

he came with wittier punches, had a bit of personals....not really, since he didn't really know his opponent.........but he still had ahardre hitting punches....k-trini, gotta wrok on wordplay, and ways to make your punches sound better/ come accross clearer...you have poor vocab and flow, which makes your verse souned cheesey and stupid

jack, i liked you pucnehs, really creative and new to the game,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,and originalilty and creativilty is good to have, so keep u[p and keep expanding your skills

v/jack the ripper
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