Amazing piece in my opinion, read it a few times to fully grasp everything actually. I love your writing style, reminds me of mine back in the day. The way you express so much throughout some simple words, it's just excellent! The vocab was kept basic but that made the piece more powerful and pure in fact. I enjoy how you portrayed different aspects of the topic, how you expressed feelings and situations. You were right when you said this is a masterpiece! One of best poets on here now...

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