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Old 06-26-05, 12:36 PM   #1
K-Trini
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u a voluntary "father figure" but you only "sonning orphans"/
and ur "punches" are about as "strait" as disses from "graham norton"//
^^OK
SICK SEEDS only ever "cumin hard" when his "DICK BLEEDS"/
watch me leave u "speechless" and leave RV having to LIP READ//
^^2nd line good,but 1st played and unoriginal
"sick seed" explains it, im soo "heavy" ill "stunt ur growth"/
ill leave this PUSSY "brown bread", id say i served a CUNT on "toast"//
^^^nah...dun like it
ill DISECT ur boy Parts so i can say sickseed hip hops/
but like "battlin" with "sandals" every diss u flip flops//
^^Nice

Okay verse.One played out bar and one unoriginal line.Best line was the last one.Decent werdplay and metas.DEcent verse.

o_0 goddamn u spit wack, like "garbage feces"......all ya "shits trash"
this shits like a womens sumo wrestlin battle...a huge "miss-match"!
^^weak.....uncreative
our skill levels are like our fingerprints...they jus dont seem to match
ya attitudes like "puppet contests", cant win without strings attatched
^^ILL
nigga ur a fuckin disgrace, like ya moms...u gettin fucked in da face
you "sliced tha wrists of CHEVY" and still couldnt cut to tha "CHASE"! (chevy chase)
^^1st line suked...but 2nd was dope
jus take this loss, but it'll "rub you tha wrong way" like thongs on clits
psychic....i can see u "dont wanna come" like when a condom splits
^^Nice

Some ill punchlines in this.Some played shit like fuckiin mom and condom shit.But still good.That 1st bar was ur worst because of it's unoriginality.U had 2 il lines which was the fingerprints/puppet and the chevy chase.

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