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Old 06-26-05, 02:04 PM   #19
K-Trini
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Voted For: Mad Dog


Can't stand this text head he's got RV in the middle of his name,
Coz he knows his net reps his only chance of fame,
^^umm.....decent I guess
Ya still type like a newb ya not so "harmful but",
Even if you were Stan Lee you still won't "Marvel us",
^^NICE
Ya overobssesed wit text i can tell by the way you write,
You prolly think you actually spittin somethin on a mic,
^^weak...set up was good,but lacked delivery.
All this time you been on RV and still you've learned shit,
Coz honestly what supposed vet still "typz lik dis"?,
^^Nice
So run along get a new style coz the garbage you spew,
Would look better if a German wrote ya verse for you,
^^Nicce

This wasa nice verse.Flowed stayed good throughout the whole verse.Only problem was that some punches lacked.More werdplay would have been better.

mad dog has no flow...we pay no attention when dis homo kid text.
i neva saw 'money grow' skill wise so in his raps i show 'no interest'.
^^U neva seen money grow...dun diss urself
he's obsessed with me quotin...its gon be easy y didn't dis hore 4fit.
i dont mean 'somthin ppl say when they mad' but my dick 'DOG-ON-iT'.
^^weeak.....
so he a 'SaC'rafice his life......just da dick ride and be on some1's 'ballz'.
from u i wont run at all..& why should i be MaD when ur da underDOG.
^^weak
ima put underdog...heard ya audio u lie'd & said ya flow was type lethal.
mc's hide ya bars..whut does a 'mad dog' usually do? they know 2 'bite ppl'.
^^c'mon....weak
how u vet fam...when in ya audio's & text fam ya flow off.
why go da 'pet land' with money when i can cum on rv & 'own-dog'.
^^OK

U had mad lines wheer u attempted to rip his name....but all failed.The last one was decent but not spectacular.Flow was okay.But ur problem was bein too weeak.

Vote-Mad Dog(vote in link below please)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196552
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