Voted For: Pen N' Paper

aiight pen and paper:
K-Trini u lacked skill, Livin Legendz didn’t want u cuz of ur stupidity
I always knew ya were an idiot, but rite now ur showin me ur simplicity
eh, not hard hittin' really.... 4/10
U rappin is like “Mic-heal Jordan” makin errors being a baseball player
The way u win battles is by swaying and realize in fact that ur a failure
eh... simple again....... 4/10
Man u “corny” I eat u up like “corn flakes” wit milk like you for breakfast
Even “lunch” or “dinner” man ill be “serving” ur wack ass so u can take this
nice word play attempt. 6/10
K-Trini man ur a mini bitch wit a gurl name ur punches are not gon be hittin
Ur other verses ive seen “stink like shit” whats the difference ur verse is shittin
haha it's coo 5/10
So K just face it u gay and theres no way for u to win this battle no prospect
Even in GFX, Topical, Audio and this in Text ill murk u cuz u just a speck…
eh, not that great.... 3/10

aiight, I'm seem better shit by you. but this was decent I guess. 22/50 (44%)

K-trini:

Pen&Paper So obssesed on stayin behind ,you'd ~write-it-late~
And you don't like the pen's function.....you just ~like-it's-shape~
no............. 2/10
It's like I'm amputating on a nuclues,cause I'm~stoppin-his-growth~
And this bitch dun wanna rap,he wanna ram my~cockin-his-throat~
no punch, not hard hittin...... 3/10
You would neva get close to stars like a review on a bad movie
Pen can follow ethics made by kin,but ya verse still won't move me
eh........... 4/10
Closest you get to stackin joints,is when you~pack-a-blunt~
Only time you loaded is when ya pumped ~back-and-front~
noooooooo....... 2/10

Damn, your other shit better than this. Try to be more witty and use wordplay. This was to simple. 11/50 (22%)

aiight V/ Pen and paper

RTF:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196402

pc one.

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