Voted For: Intermental
aiight let me see how this shit goes down:
Inter:
this nigga kid-cas wanna talk so much shit about
when grown folks talkin nigga close your mouth
eh, it wasn't really a punch. 2/10
feel me, look kid i aint no friendly ghost
so come near me bitch ill put u up in smoke
eh... same 2/10
look niggas, white boi over here call himself casper
well wigga, i am known as the black lasher
self glory..... 1/10
ill mash ya, bash ya, fuck you up like a bonanza
suck a dick faggot, you want a battle, you gon get it
same as first 2..... 2/10
im sick wit it, hip wit it, flowin mad rhymes till u sick of it
but you cant get rid of it, blowin up yo brain like I was gin and cocaine
haha this was pretty nice. good flow too 7/10
this my first battle, but still my shit is sick makin ure cranium rattle
hey vannila ice, you wanna start summin wit me u gonna melt
haha not bad. but self glory..... 5/10
you jus another eminem wanna be waitin to be felt
jus cos you can rhyme sick dont mean you a rapper
eh... 2/10
Im quicker than lightnin and im ure thunder clapper
im gonna clap you cas, and shock ya ass
you wanna survive, you betta sock it fassst
eh... 3/10
overall, we cool and all. But you gotta try to be witty wit your disses man. Like not jus like "I'ma kick your ass". Try wordplay and such. And wit, holla @ me sometime and I can help you out wit that. We cool and all, so I got you. But this was your first battle so not bad tho. 24/80
aiight Kid-cas:
alrite i already confirmed,that throw bakkz take dikkz....
and we dont play wit pussiez unless there on chickz.....
not bad..... 4/10
uve been here a min,but your on a slow improvment rate
com on dogg u joined in febuary,and u still aint elevate...
not bad.... 4/10
takes u two dayz to drop a verse,u proved that in here..
your shit jus crashes,like a plane with faulty landin gear..
same..... 4/10
my punches LAND smoothly,andf leave u breathless....
u joined throw bakk and became CUMSHOTZ mistress...
eh........ 2/10
ill end these skepticul thoughtz,like u had amnesia.....
ur punches r way off,like tha capitol of indonesia....
nah, man..... 1/10
youlnever BLOW like jonny dep,mabe like a horney diva
tha only otha chance u have,is by explodin like hiroshima
eh.. ok.. 3/10
il beat this JOKER like a old episode of batman and robin
hit wit two PUNCHES leave inters whole ego throbin.....
nah......... 2/10
cause i got time for this kid,so imma leave it at that......
read this verse & repeat after me,intermental your wack
pshh....... 2/10
wow, I thought you'd have it after readin' Interm's verse. But you kinda simple too. You jus say what you wanna do. Try addin' wit into it. Like when I first came, the tutorials helped me alot. Trust me shit works nicely and helps you. You got potential jus gotta work on word play and wit, nah mean? 22/80
Overall, this wasn't that great a battle. Both of y'all jus say shit. Put wit and wordplay to make it hurt them more. I strongly recooment goin' thru the tutorials. helped me a bunch when I first was droppin'. But keep elevatin'. Don't let this put you down, learn from these. aiight. both y'all stay up. pc one. Holla @ me if you ever need any help wit shit.
v/Interm
pc one.
RTF on this tho:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196402