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Old 06-26-05, 02:48 PM   #40
J. Luth
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Voted For: L.I.

aiight lets see:
Wicked:
everyone says "oh my god LIs so ownage at text"
switch the quote around and drown like all the rest *bitch*
wth? no......... 3/10
faggot used to be known for sonnin cats right and left
now ya ass is broke tryin to Drive hard like Unicef
ehh......... 4/10
leavin ya chin cleft, boilin u like radioactive compounds
in the game ya just a bus boy rydin greyhounds
Not hard hittin'. no punch really 3/10
gettin shit crackin in here and i aint talkin bout ya voice
ya crew fucked up, this kid cant rap they made tha wrong choice
ok..... 4/10
ths 'emcees indistructible' even had his 'jersey retired'
used to spit meaningful lyrics now ya leavin me uninspired
no hard punch..... 2/10

damn, this wasn't that great. You had good flow. But try and make your punches hit harder by adding some wit and some wordplay maybe. till then keep elevating. 16/50 (32%)

L.I.:
I'll school you in text or basketball, yah in for a sonning
Cause his punches r like air ball's the way they hit nothing
haha nice, not that hard tho.... 5/10
Even his girl abused him, by the end ill have my fun
Cuz I'll smack a bitch while you just get slapped by one
ehh.. it's cooo.. 3/10
This ugly fuck is gon call it quits, who cares, fine
Cuz this kid recedes more than his fucking hairline
lmao.... nice....... 8/10
Cut the crap, lets talk verses and how much he missed me
Wick flips my punches so much, my structure got dizzy
lmao.. wow.... nice 8/10
He has no chance at winning it, so give it all your worth b
L.I. dropped dead gorgeous in this battle, Wick stopped after the 4th D
haha nice..... 6/10

Aiight you started bad, but picked it up nicely in the end. good shit. Nice punches. 30/50 (60%)


overall easy to see who won. But props to both for spittin' and yea,

v/L.I.

RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196402
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