Voted For: One M.B.

ONB-Nice story here.Wasn't finding the 1st. verse so hot...but 2nd was.I liked the fact u spoke about how people take ur rhymes seriously while you tell em how it's for jokes.That fits the topic perfectly.Vocab was bland but it didn;t hurt ur verse.

Anxiety-Didn't like the rhyme scheme.Storytellin was a lil basic.Vocab was better than OMB's.But I found OmB's story better.And plus.....he had more lines.Neva let the oppenent have more lines than you.Gotta go head to head.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196531


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