Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

aiight let's see:

Wayne:
im the sickest FORCE and im CLEVER, i have ya CORPSE SEVERED and DISMEMBERED tha only time u see hard bars is with a CRIMINAL RECORD
blah.. ok.,..... 3/10
got 9's bust at this GUY 'like you started laugin' i split ya SIDE, bludgeon his THIGHS, wit icepicks shoved in ya EYES
no...... 2/10
i hate these WACK KIDS with who i ATTACK WITH SPITS, leave him with CRACKED RIBS, and FRACTURED HIPS,all is SONNIN-THIS BITCH,MAULED-RUN IN AND-SPLIFFEDwhen tha TEK RIPS ill DRAW BLOOOD FROM THIS PRICK like 'DIABETICS'!
ill have this BITCH catch shots from the MAC, till his DOME SPLITS and CRACKS, im QUICK with ATTACKS
tear him apart till hes CRUDE BONES, my shots have you ~in graved~(engraved) like TOMBSTONES
i come with INTENSE SCRIPTS, with TEXT-SICK, i have tha TEK SPIT, i DENT KIDS, with BENT RIBS, i make ya HEAD SPLIT when i COMMEND HITS, with ya NECK SLIT
ya raps are HARDLY DECENT, but i got venomous WORDPLAY last time you had a 'SWEET 16' was at ya BIRTHDAY

wow..... um, your strutute real hard to read. So I'm jus gonna put it all here. Your verse was decent. No real hard hittin' punches. Flow was ok. but damn, fix your structure up.


Dizze:
Seems insane like de-hydrated slaves have u fall at the cane
But herb i strike with a bat, man it definetly'l bruise wayne
lmao.... haha....... nice shit.. 8/10
Same similes? caressing angry how this pussys jaw fist bound
As u say weighin/wayne in last like bulimics piling on the pounds
lmao.. nice name flip and word play 8/10
On the ground like jelous hobo's hence at my 'dis-pence'
With bars of jibberish no wonder ur 'multis-pack' non-sense
haha, good again.....6/10
Seem tense? u should campaign for a loss see the mass elects
Shit on this ledge-end/legend like seagulls with bowel defects
damn, good wordplay again 6/10
Stretched marks ur slayed taking ur last words u should pray
As ill put humilation in waynes-world lik garth say "IM GAY"
eh, this alright 5/10
But hey ur not THAT bad drugin satan leave ur death enhanced
Couldnt be felt underground as i drain ur spirit from existance
wow.... real nice..... 8/10
Advance wiv ur stretched shit just another fake fighter
Cus ill leave ur Appendix 'present' like 'gifted' gay writers
lmao. word. nice.... 8/10

shit, your whole verse had me goin' "oh!!!" and shit like that. Real nice shit, yo. RV better watch out for you. dope shit. 49/70


v/Dizzeee

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