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Old 06-26-05, 03:08 PM   #5
J. Luth
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Voted For: K-Trini

aiight peepin':
Pred:
Don't read Trini's lyrics, he a lame, he'll never get fame/Am I battlin a female,dog? Maybe cuz he got a BITCH name/
eh... alright 4/10
My name is self explanatory/
he a fag, he the type to give another man his glory/
not a punch. no... 0/10
What else can I say K- Trini is gay, B/
Cause he always gettin stuffed like BEANIE BABIES/
eh..... 3/10

try addin' more wit and wordplay in man. your shit to simple. Add more wittiness and try for more creative shit. 7/30


K-trini:
I''d hear more praise comin from a bunch a mines doin a poutpouri
I Typed my verse wit cream on fingers,but u won't "taste" victory
it's cooo.... 4/10
I know you Pacino,cat who acts like he got a failed breast implant
Fuckin Faggot,your rhmyes are more "ragged" up than cotton plants
cooo........ 4/10
The Predator can turn invisible,yet the near sighted can see you
Only award you'd eva lock in is having the worst ever debut
nah.... 2/10
May have been sumtin if ya didn't d/r,so call u broken gem
Ya rhymes are anesthetic by the way nobody feels them
nice... 5/10


not bad, but go for more wit and wordplay. 15/40


v/Trini
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