Voted For: Dizzee Rascal


im the sickest FORCE and im CLEVER, i have ya CORPSE SEVERED and DISMEMBERED tha only time u see hard bars is with a CRIMINAL RECORD
got 9's bust at this GUY 'like you started laugin' i split ya SIDE, bludgeon his THIGHS, wit icepicks shoved in ya EYES
^^whack.....more like gangsta talk
i hate these WACK KIDS with who i ATTACK WITH SPITS, leave him with CRACKED RIBS, and FRACTURED HIPS,all is SONNIN-THIS BITCH,MAULED-RUN IN AND-SPLIFFEDwhen tha TEK RIPS ill DRAW BLOOOD FROM THIS PRICK like 'DIABETICS'!
^^stop talkin about killin him
ill have this BITCH catch shots from the MAC, till his DOME SPLITS and CRACKS, im QUICK with ATTACKS
tear him apart till hes CRUDE BONES, my shots have you ~in graved~(engraved) like TOMBSTONES
^^self glorifying
i come with INTENSE SCRIPTS, with TEXT-SICK, i have tha TEK SPIT, i DENT KIDS, with BENT RIBS, i make ya HEAD SPLIT when i COMMEND HITS, with ya NECK SLIT
ya raps are HARDLY DECENT, but i got venomous WORDPLAY last time you had a 'SWEET 16' was at ya BIRTHDAY
^^same as the others

BAssically...the problem is that you spoke about kill him.TAlkin bout"punchin him,fracturing his hips...etc".That's not battle rap.That's self glorifying gangsta talk.Take all that murder shit and make a song to put on Open mic.



Seems insane like de-hydrated slaves have u fall at the cane
But herb i strike with a bat, man it definetly'l bruise wayne (Bruce Wayne)
^^mediocre
Same similes? caressing angry how this pussys jaw fist bound
As u say weighin/wayne in last like bulimics piling on the pounds
^^OK
On the ground like jelous hobo's hence at my 'dis-pence'
With bars of jibberish no wonder ur 'multis-pack' non-sense *
^^^Agreed...after his readin his verse,there's proof
Seem tense? u should campaign for a loss see the mass elects
Shit on this ledge-end/legend like seagulls with bowel defects *2
^^Nice,but for real?he in LL?how he get in?
Stretched marks ur slayed taking ur last words u should pray
As ill put humilation in waynes-world lik garth say "IM GAY"
^^OK
But hey ur not THAT bad drugin satan leave ur death enhanced
Couldnt be felt underground as i drain ur spirit from existance ( just think )
^^^OK
Advance wiv ur stretched shit just another fake fighter
Cus ill leave ur Appendix 'present' like 'gifted' gay writers
^^Nice

Ur verse was nice.Light years ahead of the other guy's because you didn't self glorify as much.U had some nice werdplay in ur shit too.That personal with his mutlis packing gibebresh would have been whack...but his verse made it good because it showed proof.

Vote-Dizzie(please vote in link below)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196589