Voted For: J.Terror


You nice? i wouldnt say thats true
Cuz if you sick, than Hitler's cool wit gay black Jews
^^^basic,weak,and pure whack
You can play that fool, ya wack that much we all can see
Look at is lines, they longer than the ones at the DMV
^^Ok
You gon need three MD's, when i flip ,click the trigga
He about to be kicked outta this "rap city" like Bigga Tigga
^^wat tha hell...dun bring up rap city,this line was whack
You a bitch nigga, so stupid and i love it
Last time you was "cockin heat" was a rooster in the oven
^^1st line as basic as basic gets,2nd was good
Ya gimmick is trash, wit raps like that , you meet oblivion fast
A shadow could bring Terror to J's wack Caribbean ass....
^^^a shadow?..c;mon...whack

Ur verse was whack.U can't make a line sayin"U a bitch,so stupuid,and I love it".Can't be dat basic.Gotta be more complex.Flow was choppy.Only decent line was one about long lines.

No need to swing jabs,see I already won this battle, even before you signed in
But you'll get hit twice like da twin towers,cuz my punches always "bin landin"

You Could punch through glass walls,& still not be a breakthrough performance
And my punches'll chin "check" dude, even If my nickname was "allow-ants"
^^^Nice
Jaw's fist bound for a pounding, teeth shall bow to my finest- cuz I’m hot
rip & tear this pussy so many times, he’ll be mo’ limbless than KFC cups
^^Nice
And when i say i'm win'N no doubt- i ain't talkin dates with Gwen Steffani
Cock thought a hollow tip was a contraceptive, so i put 2 on his head for safety
^^set up was good,punch itself lacked
Wreckin frames, ya career'll be hittin mo' brick walls, than test dummies
And hitch couldn't chest box, even if punchin with monopoly money
^^Nice

This was a nice verse.Every line was decent except for that one after Gwen stefani line.Flow was good,and so was structure.Nice werdplay at begiinning too.U sum it up at end "Easy"

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