Well, both verses were dope and both did pretty well in following topic and what not..but in my opinion, OSB took this still. Pen took some cats, while OSB took others..this was a good topical either way.

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Pen N Paper, you came hot too. I liked some of ya lines in there and there was some nice imagery which is very important in a topical or open mic. Still, OSB took that category but yours was still dope.You also had a few tight metaphores. You followed topic well and your verse had just about everything possible.

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OneStepBeyond, you came very strong with your verse and some of the lines you had were overwhelming. Really really, good emotion. You also had some dope imagery as well. Overall, your verse was the stronger of teh two without a doubt.

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Both came nice but OneStepBeyond took this because his verse just came off stronger than Pens didn. Nice pieces from both of you though. STay Up.

Vote- OneStepBeyond

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