Voted For: §ick§eed

Soul Ya Not Da Smartest Man, MEAT GRIP..Came Online Wit Sausage Hands
Only Beatin Me If You Got Fans...That Ride Dick Harder Than Lil Kims Glands
^^^OK
You Hoe Not Necessarily A Garden Tool, Ring This Retard...Alarm His Drool
Who Knows This Fool? Ya Beg 4 Respect More Than Deadbeat Fathers Do!
^^OK
Scared Of You? Not Seed, Son You Make No Sense....Like Permin Weaves!
I'm SICK Nigga..I Heard You Sneeze, I'm Back So Exit..Tell Ya Spine 2 Leave
^^weak
TBN Would Easily Merk Dis Coward, Introduction 2 Dirt..You Meetin Flowers
Cuz You Died Before DROPPIN Ya Verse......So Fall Twice Like Da Towers!
^^^weak
You Probably Wack Like Tha Rest I've Conquered....Nigga Accept Ya Loss
Thinkin You Boss? That Title Is Mine, URINATION-ON...Now U Pissin Me Off
^^wak
12 Is Enough To Dislocate Ya Bone...Rappings A Talent...& Ur Not Known!
Abandoned Since Birth, He's So Twisted...Even Psychos Leave Him Alone
^^OK

Couple of weak lines in this.Flow was a bit bland.Try to shorten ur lines up.Best line was the deadbeat fathers one.Worst was that urination one.Add some more personals now.

Yo I'll i slit yo throat like a gash from a 'chete,
Eatin you for breakfast like a fatman wid spaghetti,
^^spagetti for breakfast?..nah,u just said it cause it rhymed
If a punch equated to a bullet fom a nine,
You'd appreciate dat you would die every time,
^^suked
Nigga you a bitch in disguise, jus admit dat shit,
Now I've seen a couple of yo rhymes,why d'ya spit dat shit?
^^basic
Yo da gap between our levels' always gettin bigger,
You v. me is like Vanilla Ice against Jigga,
^^basic
Yo I pity you fool, like Baracus from da A-Team,
Only time yo ass iz beatin me iz in ya daydream,
^^basic
I be murkin fake ones on a regular basis,
Look nigga me n you both know where your place iz,
Lyrically i'll leave you battered, left bloody n blue n black
Hit you nonstop like Blackjack wid a deck of jacks,
I dare your ass to try n lyrically attack man,
I'll leave yo ass needin more pills than PacMan....


I ain't breakin it down no more.Ur shit was more pre-school than 50 cent and G-Unit.It was the epotome of simpilicity.Add more similies,metas,werdplay....shit like dat.Dun just say"u a bitch in disguise,just admit it".That shit 's whack.

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