~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP:
Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless
Spul I must be "ghost too"...but its different in my way.
Cause your punches go through,less hits then your myspace.
2/10...Doesnt fit
April was mentioed.In your verse,so a delay was admited...
I gave u extra time.....comin up second'll take you a minute
3/10..Didnt work eitheir
1st you mournin over jill,a smooth stalker today.
all that purple rain...I'm surprised you aint offer me grapes.
8/10....Lol...Hot
.....And pancakes,I don't know how much the you can take.
I'll rampage............if my little brother was my only fanbase
4/10...EH OK
if efection was a weapon then......then I love you to death
so you livin forever through your music....judgin the rest.
3/10....No
Rappers run the world,We can endure any overtake.
But accordin to your name,that means U in a lower case.
7/10....Nice Closer
U had good concepts
but ya punches werent connecting
kinda like u was jus talkin instead of punches
i jus got out of this problem...of a punch lookin
like a punch...but its really not...use more similies
and metas and u woulda had diss...
45%...
Man, people hackin' into your names, man, you've never been best
walkin' into a club without your ears only time you Indeph (in deaf)
7/10...Nice punch off his name
Your bars are all big, meanin' your rhymes, they all lack flows
Your bars are THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS wide...
.......................................... almost as wide as your nose
6/10....Lol...another funny concept
You a ugly motherfucka, scared of the mirror, you need some help
You the posterboy for birth control, I mean... look at yourself
5/10....eh coulda been worded better
Like a vegetable, man, your punches they never meat
Puttin' your girls hand on my dick, is the only time I'm beat
3/10.....No..1st line..hot..2nd ...Not
Makin' a thread about RV's horror story, oh, word, my dear
you must have diarrhea of the mouth, and constipation of the ideas
4/10....Didnt really work
Fuck Chicago, man, the windy city, nucca please
Like a b-ball game, man, you can ever win, wit out the D
7/10...Nice Similie and Meta
Had better punches...u won this battle by like 2 punches
u kinda fell off ya grind a lil..get back 2 the old Spul
Nice concepts here and metas which got u the win
work on ya structure and flow kid
60%
Spul Winz
*Nuff Said*
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