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Old 06-26-05, 05:51 PM   #27
L.I.3
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Man, people hackin' into your names, man, you've never been best
walkin' into a club without your ears only time you Indeph (in deaf)
na..doesnt hit
Your bars are all big, meanin' your rhymes, they all lack flows
Your bars are THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS wide...
.......................................... almost as wide as your nose
seen this type of concept flipped so much =\
You a ugly motherfucka, scared of the mirror, you need some help
You the posterboy for birth control, I mean... look at yourself
eh, ok
Like a vegetable, man, your punches they never meat
Puttin' your girls hand on my dick, is the only time I'm beat
once again an eh, ok
Makin' a thread about RV's horror story, oh, word, my dear
you must have diarrhea of the mouth, and constipation of the ideas
na wording sucked
Fuck Chicago, man, the windy city, nucca please
Like a b-ball game, man, you can ever win, wit out the D
i get it but still it isnt hard

vs.

Spul I must be "ghost too"...but its different in my way.
Cause your punches go through,less hits then your myspace.
damn....nice witty punch
April was mentioed.In your verse,so a delay was admited...
I gave u extra time.....comin up second'll take you a minute
na
1st you mournin over jill,a smooth stalker today.
all that purple rain...I'm surprised you aint offer me grapes.
eh na
.....And pancakes,I don't know how much the you can take.
I'll rampage............if my little brother was my only fanbase
decent i should have said i'd instead of i'll
if efection was a weapon then......then I love you to death
so you livin forever through your music....judgin the rest.
na
Rappers run the world,We can endure any overtake.
But accordin to your name,that means U in a lower case.
alright personal..needs better wording

V/1ndeph

Sorry SPuL but you just slacked with a quickly keyed verse. He came well and had some witty shit in there. 1ndeph u got some great potential, jsut work on your wording of concepts better. Coo battle guys, but it showed who wanted the W more
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