Voted For: Payn


Payn will verbally knock out ya dentals..\
in text i'm suspensful when i jot wit pencils\\
^^self glorifing
have diz newbie hit more soft spots..Shit, u'd think he was in a mental hospital!..\
no rank is wut ya text gets, Out Breathe Kid? my punches land where ya chest is..\
^^this bar didn't rhyme
topin' me.. nah, b stay infront of hoods, buryin' more DZK's & i'm not talkin' bout breathing methods!..\
^^self glorifing
i'll counter ya attack as my blows flow Around yah hits, Fist'll pound yah spits..
But bitch, i'll have you lookin up to 20, Like checking for conterfeits!..
^^nope...weak and whack
The win i doubt you can handle..Cus yah chest calvical im bout to dis-mantle..
Cus Only tyme L ova my head is when doing sign langague of your outcome in this battle!..
^^^whack
Hood you awful-wita-pen..i'll shove my fist in yah mouth an put yah talking-an-end..
Cus Payn will rip thru yah arteries from yah chest and through yah temple..cause it apparent you thought-you-had-a-win!..
^^weak

Ur shit suked.....too much self glorifying and no werdplay,meta,or personals.Save that glorifying shit for Open mic.And structure ur verse better.Shit was ugly.

beat your head in death to my enimies
ur on ur last leg im a frekin centipied,
^^wasn't a punch
im from west virginia ill put sumtin sharp in ya
stabbin men in they abdomin so hard my javolin splinters,
^^^self glorifying
hits so hard it hits six parts of ya inners causin enternal bleedin
seein my light on this text is the only way your still breathin,
^^OK
ill teach you a thing or 2 when i kidnap and drag you and your family handily to the back of my labroom
^^diss god damn it
leave your mother-fucked gutted and shackled hung from a block of tackle,
from the tub in my bathroom leave your brother and sister coverd in stabwounds
^^stop...make a punchline
maggots crawlin in and out of your dads blood splatterd jacket
and a rappers kadabber looks like rabbid badgers got at it,
^^whack
see sadness just isnt a emtion im capable of havin
so in takin you breakin you and laughin,
and when i say breakin u i dont mean mentally actually
i mean most of your bones bein broken and crackalin\
^^omg

Same shit.U glorified a lot and had too much gangster tak.U didn't have any punches like the other guy.So I gotta base it on flow.Ur structure was far better than payn.And so was ur flow.So ya got my vote.

Vote-DZK(vote in link below please)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196901


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