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Old 06-26-05, 07:55 PM   #36
K-Trini
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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

Damn homie you got respect,you a veteran, WAIT...
that fake quote,would probably work better when named.
^^Ok personal
that sig states a quote,that coulda brought up your hope...
yeah you could prove me wrong.....if I thought you were dope.
^^^whack...too simple
and there's a lie in the box you supposed to be reppin in...
nigga everyone got skills,on your level of excellence.
^^^uncreative...shit's pre-school
westside till you die,then after this you are midwest...
no more game no more dre,go and listen to dipset.
^^^suks
Go read a Book, "OF" shouldn't be O-V?...
shit,with you O.G's could of meant Oh Geez.
^^^whack

Ight look.....ur shit flowed nicely and was structured nicely....but ur punches suked.They were too basic."Everyone is at ur level a excellence?".What the hell is dat.That shit's pre-school.Gotta add complexity.

Talkin bout ''strap up''?...Rockin a titty cup, Da heat in ur ''Bra''*
''Punch''? ugh, U dont even have da experience 2 serve at a Bar!
^^that shit's played out to death
battlin u aint gettin very far, Lyke a Vietnemese on da Frontline
0-0? juz goes 2 show Ya skillz ''premature'' & this aint ur time!
^^Nice
we go Rhyme 4 Rhyme? so lame dude asked me 2 ''Swap Verses''
he got worried, no propps & it it took him dayz 2 Rehearse-His
^^ight
First Skriptz, Now U?..........Thanks dude, 4 siggin my ''Sonz''
ur juz ''weak-fun''...claimin ''its so hard'' 2 pull off a ''BIG PUN''
^^whack
if u own a Gun, stick ya ''trigger finger'' where it Belongs
..then rite b4 u ''pull''..go 'head & listen 2 Nirvana songs
^^whack
I'm not wrong, suicidez ya best Option, lyke Gothic Kids
only ''time'' u see'n ''action'' iz watchin old redman Vids
^^OK
Verses r hated, handstanin lookin at ''mom'' iz ur only ''wow''
shit ur shamin a legend...change da pic, cuz even he hates u now
^^ight

Look...ur shit was no Dope by any means.But it was better than Indeph.Manly cause you had werdplay and metas or bassically.....complexity which was lost in indeph's verse.U killed him.

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