Voted For: Typical

they call me typical, the one u should aspire to be
but for know, take this lose like u admire defeat
^^u mean now right?and this was weak,but flowed nice
i read ur old rhymes to see the proof in ur hype
so after this u could say: "at least i used to be nice"
^^OK
becuz essentially, i've designed a recipe for dining on my enemies
keep trying where u residing, but dont rely on hiding in perenthesis
^^weak punch...but flowed nice
wit a name like that, u should be robbin persons on the strip
but jimmy only go in pocketz when hes searchin for a dick
^^LOL...this shit made me laugh
my surgical gift's, equiped to whip ur verginal script
funny how this isnt jail... but ur my personel bitch
^^OK

Ur flow was crazy throughout the whole verse.The best line was the one about jimmy only goes pocketz for dick.U had a couple of weak punches in there that were really basic though.

Your gonna get Ko'd Until your Conditions Critical
& Under 100 Posts from your Competition is Typical
^^^weak
Whos ya Crew..Its Probly going on its Ninth Boss
Callin me Out..Told Rv u were Eager for ya 9th Loss
^^self glorifing?or did he really do dat
Your Bound 2 Get Hoe'd....... like ya Fightin ya Pimp
And This is a Ko..Like Iron Mikes last Fightin Attempt
^^pimp and attempt dun rhyme and too unoriginal
Your Not Gangster..1 call have u Thrown in Full Rugs
Im Goin Ova ya Head like Infants Thrown in Full Tubs
^^^nah...seemed to glorify
Orgy Viewin on the Internet. 1 time u seen 10 Dimez
Focused?How when u cant Do No More than 10 Linez
^^^Nice

Ur shitwas structured better than his....but didn;t flow as well.Only good punch weas the last one for you.U had a couplke of weak punches and one that self glorified.That one about callin u out.Did he really say that he's eager for his 9th loss or are u glorifing urself again?

Vote-Typical(please vote in link below)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196901