Voted For: Black City


dis wack nigga want to battle, i guess my only question is why
cuz his flow is worst than a 'sung verse' from a nigga like 'T.I.'
^^whack
i hate to spit like dis, rippin pred up and ruinin his whole career
but greatness in ya future is like ya bitch hair, homie it aint there
^^whack....got alink to something that proves he got a bald girl
my shit is crushin you, so take whateva you wrote down to say and trash it
cuz dis one is 'one-sided' like tha 'cassidy and freeway battle classic'
^^^OK
its a wrap bitch, in eight lines four bars i ate yo cookie ass up
and please stop rappin cuz we lil 'eminems', we 'dont give a fuck'
^^whack

3 whack punches one decent.Just decent.....not all dat hot.Flow was mediocre.Creativity suked.U need to put wordplay and metas.Add complexity and creativity.

Where I'm from we beat niggas freestylin or written/B.City a lame, how he spittin',where the fuck is "Tha Mitten"?/
^^whack....
I've read this niggas battles, and I say he lost in some/
cause Black City's flow is shaky like he got Parkison's'/
^^^well...um....ight....
Black City actin like he won't get hit by tha Uzi or tha Tech/
B.C. guns don't bust, like they haven't hit puberty yet/
^^whack
Black City represent the GB Boiz/
^^gon finish that bar?

Ight first....structure ur bar off better.lOok at how Black City dropped his shit.Urs was mad ugly.U had not one decent punchlines.Like BC....ya need wordplay and metas.And stop stretchin ur lines....kills out the flow

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