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Old 06-26-05, 10:13 PM   #26
~Luciano~
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Voted For: Mimesis

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You not a gangsta, ya 'lifestyles' like 'condomns', all about 'safety'
U aint convincing, you hella 'skinny', so we kno u aint 'taste beef'
1/10....Fuck No....i kno u wish u didnt put this

U scrambling out shots, so we kno 'mimesis' searching for fame
43 wins from herbish lame but yo 'semi-mis' me just like your name
1/10.....Another Fuck No...

U can't catch up to me, I'm fast....u should take a lil rest
I'll snatch ya tongue out, then throw it back to u, so u'll catch ya breathe
2/10...And still your Blowing it

cut my brain to see my thought, theres yo advantage bitch
u could put yo feet where yo asshole is, and still wont run shit
5/10....Better concept and attack

i think u should put a knife in yo rhyme book, and when you spit, we'll fear it
cause even witta mouth full of 'peanuts', you wouldnt be 'roastin' lyrics

6/10...Ok closer


Ok umm..elevation elevation elevation elevation

thats bout all u need
get ya multies...simi's...Punches u have the concept
but go read some vets battlez and u will catch on
personals...ok..coulda did some research tho cuz
open and closes were weak

without a 1st and last impression...more than
likely your gonna get ya opponents post vote
buttons pushed...


Fuck bluffing skills.. cant run a crew.. accept that you be nothing
Cause you can't be a Living Legend until you succeed in SOMETHING
4/10....ok

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I'm dumping your shit son.. and now everybody's watching see,
It's like I'm talking in third person the way I'm just dropping M-E

2/10....Bad set and delivery kid

You be garbage.. I'm typin hotness while you be waiting son
Cause after I urn my win.. I'll just put your damn remains in one

5/10...nice pickup and quick punch...coulda been worded diff

You suck son.. with your fake sig.. fag, get to walkin dude
Now you're the best kept secret?
..Man, it's just cause nobody wants to talk to you
4/10.....Blah.......no comment

Flocking to dr.. but ill still lay the smack down, nobody be lovin you
Fuck, I ain't buying wrestling leagues but I'll still take the ECW
5/10.....Eh better closer than your comp

[B]
Seen better from u ...
Far from one of your bests

i think u kinda knew your opponent
was sorta weak..so u didnt try
well atleast i hope so

punches were aight...had the concept
lil inconsistent
structure was ok...i dont do the whole 3
line concept...but it works i guess
personals..werent really ther
similies and metas were good

overall it was vet ova rook

V/Mim
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