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Old 06-27-05, 01:57 AM   #12
Sik Wit It
 
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Voted For: Wicked One

Fuck ya gimic cus line ya stomach wiv faeces ya cudnt spit sick shit
Combining boxing n cricket u know my punches strike out wicket (wicked/wicket)
aight..
Thick bitch couldnt campaign for a win yet brings re-petition/repetition
So ur verses lack back bone nowonder you flop for the competition (verses-VS)
weak punch
Just listen in amazement ill line ya cheek bone have ur jaw adjacent
Complacent? Its a statement ill 'end one' like finishing conversation
decent multies, punch was okay
No debation ill hit stealth curious that ill stampede on ur health
Making an alias to hide only time ull make a name for yourself
wtf.. didn’t like this line
Im striking violence listen split this organism like internal fission
Consider 'mating silence' the way i under-mime ur position *
decent
A magician make u dissapear cus we all know you try chokes
Optimistic that ur genders hazy like pregnants with high hopes
nope


Hey Ho it's the same ol' same ol' great flows make ya brain explode...
Talk yo shit and cross that bridge so the carnage can take it's toll...
decent opener
This is a recipe for distaster, realize your battling the master..
With razor blades, I'll leave you with more cuts than terrible actors...
coo
This dude is on crack, thinkin I wont be able to strike back ..
Thats laugthter, I'm on the war path holding more arms than heart attack havers...
weak
Come see this lame, look at the ego, thinking he left me rattled...
Please, he's now in the fight for his life like a custody battle...
okay
Forfit this battle, and retire, you'll never take my title...
This dudes trying to measure up to Dizzee Rascal from the bottom of a downward sprial...
flow = too long.. punch was aight
Man fuck you and your frozen ice solid stare I'm making it melt...
Please, testin me is a game of solitaire you're playing yourself...
decent closer

overall both verses were aight..
punches were okay.. & both structures need help
DR.. work on ur punches cuz them shits were
pretty weak.. fix ur structure, & add some personas
up in ur verses, u 2 Wicked.. ur punches were
weak too, but u took this one cuz ur shits weren’t
as weak as DR’s tho..
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