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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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this was good man, flow and structure were good, vocab was pretty good also, only thing i found bad about it was the //, no need for that man, it makes it harder to read, keep it up, and RTF on my om Worth It
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i come from a time when you earned respect,
for your rhyme and the way you made words connect,
not the money that you made or the girls you sexed,
a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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