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Old 06-27-05, 05:48 AM   #2
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Nice piece right here with very strong and pure emotion. I love the concept of it all even though it has probably been done before but then again what hasn't? Enjoy how you repeat the "How do I say this" three times and go into detail afterwards. It's nicely divided into several parts, showing the person's feelings and fear to say what he wants to say.

Keep going boy
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