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Old 06-27-05, 10:12 AM   #2
Dervla
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On the real..This was overall a good diss. Had some decent wordplays in there. Punches were connected. Flows was off a few places but you picked up at the end. I was looking for some personals..you had a few but i expected more...You had some glore at the end which i didnt like, and made that part of the verse i didnt want to read. But during those glore lines you had decent wordplays and that what made me keep on reading..


Overall Nice diss
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