this was a wack concept from beginning to end
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be more original n not mainstream with ya om's
dont mention eminem in ya shit n think it'll
make people like what they read.....
you need alot of elevation .. find ya style cuz as of
right now it just looks like gibberish that ryhmes...
no hate man, just being real...i wouldve never posted trash like this
you need to up your standards of whats good n whats bad in ya
opinion....seriously....go back to the drawing board n research
what dope heads drop on this board n on others.....

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!