Voted For: Wall Street

Yo "Wall Steets" name stinks more than his fart,
his minds lost like the stock from "Wall-Mart",
.^^are you serious?
**On AIM he IM's me constantly buzzin in my ear,
Gave up his ailias's name says "dont say anything" in fear,
.^^^OK
***He wont shut up talkin bout "peep my OM and drop feed",
we did a collab. of poetry he couldent keep up i held the lead,
.^^^OK
****so Wall please tell me this what will you say when the shit hits the fan,
and admit when you were Yung you droped a Trae and said damn,
.^^weak
*****you will never be better than me homie and thats the damn truth,
I tought you everything you know since you lost ur first tooth.
^^^wat u talkin bout....that ain't a punch

Yo...ur shit lacked in punches.Ur structure wasn't that good.That last bar could have been a hard hittin punch if you used it better.U just stated shit in ur verse.Where are your wordplay ans metas?

Ay, Your A Easy Win For Me, A Quick One You Dig?
Watch Me Serve LS Quicker Then The Food In His Sig
^^ight....but kinda a self glorifing bar
Straight Ripping This Kid, How's He Going To Bother Me
Write Rap? Dude...Can't Even Spell Your Name Properly
^^^LO...Nice
A Blasphemy To Think You Got Skills It Don't Show Up
Cuz You Named Yourself Solja And Still Couldn't Blow Up
^^nah...I dun like this one
And Yo, Battle Wall Street How Dumb Can You Be
Solja Kicks Childish Rhymes, No Wonder He's "Infantry'
^^^OK.....a lil basic though
You Don't Really Serve In A Unit, And Lying's A Sin G
Cuz The Only Time This Solja 'Post' In 'Lines' Is On RV*
^^NICE

Well....ur verse was a lil repitive as you constantly went after his name.At times...you were a lil too basic.Ur flow was ight.U structured ur verse nicely.Just next time try not to be so basic.But ya still gettin the win here.

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