Voted For: Dopium

U aint gettin into P.S.A ill make ya whole vision turn grey
Got ya name from a famous rapper O.D.B u fake ass emcee
^^^didn't rhmye
Tryin out for Psa and heavy hittas at the same time
ya shit is confusing like trying to understand a mime
^^OK...but kinda played
bitch ill 'infect' ya causing retardedness in ya mind
Your as wack as that bitch Marilyn 'Manson'
^^too basic
fuckin with me will cause ya head to spin
when u get merked its gonna be 'end of days'
^^^didn't rhyme
u wont be shit if u change ur name to 'johnny blaze'
merking me is like a retard goin through a maze
^^whack

Only half-decent punchline was the one with mimes.The rest was basic.U can't just say"U worse than Mayirllyn".U gotta be more complex.Wordplay and metas.


your skills r a myth like asians wit asses
ill murdah u bitch have u turned bac 2 ashes
^^self glorify
im a real G u kno i stay high and
ya verse iz even smaller than wut ya bitch is ridein
^^whack...elementary diss
keep fuckin wit me n git ya throat cut
ill have ya takin shots like ya do in tha butt
^^self glorified
eryone kno u fresh wit homo ass niggas
'n' tha mex dont bet wit normal ass figgas
^^self glorified
when u hit tha streets, u cuddle tha cock
but when im steppin out, its ta hustle tha block
^^self gloriry
yea im 0-2 ,call it tha written curse
but it bout ta git broke ,spittin dis verse
^^dun bring up losing record

Okay....you self glorified too much.Focus on dissin and nothing more.Add some metas and wordplay.If ya got a losing record....hide it and dun mention it.

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