Voted For: §ick§eed

This Kid Is Hard To Beat? Nah I Seen Ya Battle Herb Just Go To Bed And Admit Defeat
Lines Don't Matter, Punches? Wearing Gloves By Heaters Is The Only Way They Pack Heat
^^^Ight...a bit long,not flow,but content,shorten it &it would hit harder
Your Talent Dispersed, Four Winz Missing In Action Just Like Ya Barz Can’t Be A Verse,
Here Is A New Disease It A Ko Your Been Infected Someone Pleez Get Sick Seed A Nurse.
^^^weak and uncreative
Up Ya Skillz Ya Verse Lack Creativity Your One In Need What A Name This Guys Diseased
Nah I Seen Ya Battle Im Suprized U Got For Winz Cause Ya Lines Are Ones To Succeed.
^^weak

First bar was good,2nd bar was unoriginal,and 3rd just didn;t hit.Wat ya need to is get rid a uneeded worse.Just put the core of the punch and no more.When ur lines are long....it weakens the punch.


definition of garbage is you, Sick battlin a lame??? yes, i admit its true!
hes "no jerk" so gettin signed means his managers dicks stayin "blue"
^^^OK.....1st line suked
dried up, kid ya flow is damaged...u been dead like prehistoric maggots
eva since u started like a 'homo wit a circumsized dick'..u fell off faggot
^^^Ok....creative
puffin is new to dis cat, somebody had ta teach u bout smokin on hash
but young will neva roll more green than folks wit ARTIFICIAL GRASS
^^^DOPE
your talents no where next to me, as half of 50 u couldnt "disect a G" (unit)
u talk alot so as a child, his moms wanted his vas deferens removed
..................................instead, da doc gave his mouth a vasectomy!!
^^^^too long

This wasa really nice verse.Real creative and fresh concepts.Some lines were a lil longer than they should have been.You had some good wordplay and metas.NIce verse.U killed the other guy

Vote-Sickseed(vote in link below in or I'll have this vote removed)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196589