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Old 06-27-05, 07:15 PM   #42
K-Trini
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Voted For: Wickedclown

I'll school you in text or basketball, yah in for a sonning
Cause his punches r like air ball's the way they hit nothing
^^^played out and uncreative....2/10
Even his girl abused him, by the end ill have my fun
Cuz I'll smack a bitch while you just get slapped by one
^^^got a LINK to show he proof of him gettin beat by his bitch......or is it a fake personal........1/10
This ugly fuck is gon call it quits, who cares, fine
Cuz this kid recedes more than his fucking hairline
^^weak.....and not hardhittin.......3/10
Cut the crap, lets talk verses and how much he missed me
Wick flips my punches so much, my structure got dizzy
^^^ight...6/10
He has no chance at winning it, so give it all your worth b
L.I. dropped dead gorgeous in this battle, Wick stopped after the 4th D
^^stretched out..2/10

You were too uncreative.U need to be original and bring new concepts to the table.Ur best line was the dizzy structure line because it was original.It was kinda weak like the rest.U flowed ight throughout the verse until u strched out the last bar.
4/10


everyone says "oh my god LIs so ownage at text"
switch the quote around and drown like all the rest *bitch*
^^OK....6/10
faggot used to be known for sonnin cats right and left
now ya ass is broke tryin to Drive hard like Unicef
^^^OK....6/10
leavin ya chin cleft, boilin u like radioactive compounds
in the game ya just a bus boy rydin greyhounds
^^I dun like this so much....4/10
gettin shit crackin in here and i aint talkin bout ya voice
ya crew fucked up, this kid cant rap they made tha wrong choice
^^too basic..........2/10
ths 'emcees indistructible' even had his 'jersey retired'
used to spit meaningful lyrics now ya leavin me uninspired
^^^mediocre...........5/10

U were still pretty weak.U had a lil more creativity than LI.U didn't have any stretched lines....so yuo also had better flow.Wat you missed is personals.But I'll give ya the vote because you had about 2-3 decent punches while L.I. had one.

Vote-Wicked Clown(Please vote in link below or I'll have to remove this vote)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196552
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