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Old 06-27-05, 10:29 PM   #21
K-Trini
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From: N.Y./born in Trinidad
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Voted For: PreZidict

by excepting this battle you apperrantly have wild imagination
your skills is weak and like bill murray, lost in translation
^^^OK......4/10
i'm beatin' you into submission, like im spittin' wit verbal bullwhips
thinkin' you gon win is justa hallucination, like you on acid trips
^^^1st line glorified,2nd ight....4/10
my words will devoure your dome lik sum fuckin head lice
this aint no rap battle this a stick-up a regular win heist
^^^whack.......2/10
becuz ya punches "half-baked", take that fairytale shit back to tha bakersman
you mad cuz ya justa tran, tryin' cut off sum balls like dude from tha ladies man
^^^OK.....5/10
your skill couldn't be fly if you was a fuckin' bald eagle
even ya wordplay is under me, and can never be "Equal
^^^suks....3/10
your text mathmatically incorrect like infinity replicated
your brain is ment to contain small shit like car seats
^^^whack...2/10

Flow was ight.U need to make your shit more creative.U structured ur verse OK.But ur problem was punches.They just didn't hit hard.Try puttin personal and add werdplay/metas.

Tycoon liftin techs?? no, he only beats when listenin 2 techno
pee'd on apartment buildings cuz he want a COMPLEX-FLOW!
^^^Nice.......7/10
he aint allowed 2 curse..when he high i'm puttin a hex-low
u a ugly kid, every birds-afraid of ya face u fuckin scare-crow!
^^nah........3/10
homie u frail!, bein born 2 da devil dont mean u da fetus of hell
how could i fail?, must be a known smoker..he's no virgin to L's!*
^^This didn;t hit hard.........2/10
ya losses surmount in abundance, whats his rank.....0 outta 100
like abducted deaths...might have 3 wins but u still ain nothin!**
^^OK.......6/10
ya rhymes aint brilliant, livin in portland they still wont blaze***
faggot stuck his dick in a obstacle n still couldnt be FUCKIN A"MAZED"****
^^a lil basic,this used too much....4/10
u have no brains, so my last bar'll slip ya mind like clumsy thoughts
neva knew a person could slob themselves..til dis retard sucked himself off!
^^^OK.............5/10

U had some Ok punches.But some were played like a-maze one.At times you were to basic like the scarecrow one.Flow was ight.Structure was good.Punches were mediocre.The first punch was the best one.

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