Voted For: CherryBluntZ


cherrybluntz son suc/
philly haze bringin philly blaze/
^^self glorified
i attack u with this battle cuase i rap stiry my ryhmes are wordy/
to wordy for u cause u so new u can't even hang wit me and my crew /
^^whack....didn't rhyme
fuck u u done son/
cherrybluntz sux cherry cunts fuck cherrybluntz /
^^stretched out
philly haze bring philly bac to tha top philly bluntz try it son!/
^^U gon finish that bar?

Everything was wrong with ur verse.U had weak vocab.Poor structure.No werdplay,metas,or personals.Stretched lines.Weak flow.Werk on everything

this niggas frontin, step up to me, he's not ever half/
someone get him a wipe, he's hyped up due to tha diaper rash/
^^^whack
with all that shit out ya mouth need ta visit a dentist/
look nigga u like a bank with no money, we have no INTEREST/
^^^OK
yes the best against a pure juvenile, this battle u won't rob/
he has guns? shit he probably already commited a "Cheddar BoB"/
^^^nah...suks...played
forget homey i didn't wanna battle an embryo, that's already a ho/
and instead of a pacifier he uses a male sex organ so/
^^^suked...that last werd put there just to rhyme
maybe i should just fetch him some energizers so he can leave me alone and get his "light saber"/
plz homey, u nuthin like ya rhymes, i use them for toilet paper/
^^played out

U were uncreative in it.U had better structure and better flow than philly.reason U gon win is because you actually had punches unlike the other guy.

Vote-Cherry(vote in link below or this vote being Dq'd)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196589