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Old 06-27-05, 11:55 PM   #23
.Barz Of Steel.
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Voted For: Typical

Wow, This shit is gonna be close...

Troop:

Your gonna get Ko'd Until your Conditions Critical
& Under 100 Posts from your Competition is Typical

blah 5/10

Whos ya Crew..Its Probly going on its Ninth Boss
Callin me Out..Told Rv u were Eager for ya 9th Loss

Decent 6/10

Your Bound 2 Get Hoe'd....... like ya Fightin ya Pimp
And This is a Ko..Like Iron Mikes last Fightin Attempt

Good...7/10

Your Not Gangster..1 call have u Thrown in Full Rugs
Im Goin Ova ya Head like Infants Thrown in Full Tubs

LOL Nice 8/10

Orgy Viewin on the Internet. 1 time u seen 10 Dimez
Focused?How when u cant Do No More than 10 Linez

Decent 5/10

Overall: 31/50 (62%)

Good verse from you man, but you had some played lines, and some just werent that creative. Personals were there, but I would've liked to see more. Apart from those things, everything else was fine here.

Typical:

they call me typical, the one u should aspire to be
but for know, take this lose like u admire defeat

Solid Opener 7/10

i read ur old rhymes to see the proof in ur hype
so after this u could say: "at least i used to be nice"

LOL Sweet 9/10

becuz essentially, i've designed a recipe for dining on my enemies
keep trying where u residing, but dont rely on hiding in perenthesis

Good 8/10

wit a name like that, u should be robbin persons on the strip
but jimmy only go in pocketz when hes searchin for a dick

LMAO 9/10

my surgical gift's, equiped to whip ur verginal script
funny how this isnt jail... but ur my personel bitch

Good closer 8/10

Overall: 41/50 (82%)

Real good verse from you man. Punches were strong, creative, and consistent. Personals were there and they hit well. You had some funny plays on his name, particularly the "jimmy only go in pocketz when hes searchin for a dick" line. Overall, a solid drop for you man.
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