damn, makaveli u got cussed tha fuck out....

aight peepin Sound Off....intro is soundin dope....word u do sound white cuz lol...u got some nice lines, but u need to up your delivery and the energy put a bit of rasp n anger in your voice n flow, yo flow is solid n on beat consistently, the beat pauses are aight not really neccesary tho, quality aint 2 bad, hook is poor needs more layers like sum adlibs etc etc...not a bad trac cuz
RTF::
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197064

__________________