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Voted For: SR$
this wasn't that good a battle.both verses seemed to be lackin in effort for real. complexity and meta's and multi's were virtually inexistant and there were hardly any decent punches in this battle and a serious lack of wordplay.
the only kinda hittin punch was SRS's line about impersonating BIG, but even that was a sloppy punch.
But SRS had a better flow, even though it was pretty basic.
But it's like 1mic was forcing rhymes in his verse, so i wasn't feelin that at all. vocab needed a whole lotta uppin for real. and you should keep your lines at the same length because the unevenness made it effort to follow the verse.
But SRS, you came with weak punches also. the only thing that brought out your verse ahead of 1mics was the structure.
Both of you need to do better than this but SRS gets my vote
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