Voted For: mizz fyre

Flow - Both of you had nice structure and excellent flow.But I think Tweety stayed more consistant.
Flow=tweety

Emotion -Paraniod.....tweety seemed to be tellin a story and not really having emotion.But it did't hurt her verse one bit really.
Emtion=papraniod

Captiviting -I think Tweety had a more captivating verse because papraniod seemed a lil on the boring side.I guess because all this drama/sadness emotion shit is gettin tiresome.
captivating=tweety

Vocab - Paraniod.....not to say tweety's was bad...but it's just paraniod's was better.
Vocab=Paraniod

Originality -Tweety....her concept of a girl before marriage is sumtin I haven't really seen before.
Originality=Tweety

Vote-tweety(please drop a vote in my battle below or I'll have to remove this vote)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196901