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Old 06-29-05, 12:46 PM   #26
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Voted For: GKillaz05

You’re the worst GK.. but face it.. your text is dormant
& when GK hits the pad.. he uses extra absorbent
decent start

Stay pounding you w/ these punches.. & I’ll crack the mold
But your verse has more dots n’ dashes..
..than Morse codes
herd that befor hope it aint BIT played concept

In text your weak.. plus.. your punches amount to shit
GK soils his pants.. he added water & created a rain forest
WTF?? WEAK... N dumb.. *no hate*

You kind of remind me of Jay-Z – out there wrecking the sales
Also.. minus the flow, album hype, plus everything else
aight..

Your not a very good employee.. so I’m about to give you the boot
& your sitting at your computer.. surfing the net.. wearing a wet-suit
ha funny ending...

u had a good punch a couple of aight bars noting really stood out besides ya last bar, vocab average multis none, diss aight....

u did aight 7/10



Your so whack, you might as well check-in and not spit...
I'll set your toilet on fire, just so you got hot shit...
better start decent...

Your winnin' streak ima stop it, Kid get ready to lose...
fuck kinda name is Smoove?.. musta been drinkin' booze...
aight just flowin...

All your lyrics hear is boo's.. like there were ghosts...
Wanted 2 prewrite his verse so he ignored all my posts...
decent...

Your raps are burnt like toast, no one whould bite it...
Wouldnt be surprised if you got your mother to write it...
aight

Gettin' all excited like a dog, about to piss yourself...
Rhymes are retarded... when you spit you diss yourself...
decent ending could of been better

u stood more consistent but punches could of been harder ya flow was better, multis sorda, but u still stood more consistent thats why i voted for u

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