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Old 06-29-05, 12:52 PM   #16
J. Dubya
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Voted For: Daubs

The way you dont get no claps, your safe without a vest-on..
Vags the master of Z.......no wonder his battles get slept-on!!
hah, good nameplay here, punch was decent
Va's git a 4 inch dick, no wonder hes ashamed of his manhood..
And yes your taking over RV.....when we lie down and give up!!
decent
The way you run cicles around no one, your a broken bracelet..
Call i.t. archeology.........but even your IP knows your ancient!!
some reason I thought this closer was aight here


There ain’t no “flames in the house” just because ya Corpse gets HOME Cooked
Your NO GOOD, you only have a “burning passion” because I Torched ya NOTE Book
nah, flow is too stretched & the punch was weak
Sure I “Script jokes”, but when I Spit though, I’ll “Ink-Serious”
I won’t hesitate to put a “pussy in the dirty” like the Sphinx-Pyramid
not hard hittin but it was okay
Just EXCEPT it, Daubs is Destined A LonelyEnd…
Because when it comes to those of YOUR worth, Depression’s your Only Friend…
nope

overall.. daubs took this one, punches were harder, each bar was
a personal & had a decent structure.. gita.. work on your punches
add personals in there.. & fix ur flow + structure also.. seriously