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Voted For: K-Trini
v/ K-Trini.....simply hit him harder in every sense of the concept....
bitch outta your league...step to the plate but its a K ya see
cause im throwing 3 strikes, one for each of his nis
^bars are susposed to rhyme right?....and no is wasnt the way i read it...you had the last bar rhyming.....
bliss, work on ya structure and get better concepts going...ya whole nameplay on KTrini was wack....
[catagories go here]...K-Trini
K-Trini....up ya content, too...i wasnt feeling it much, but you did a lot better than bliss
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