Thread: Burnt Bridges
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Old 06-29-05, 04:32 PM   #3
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holy shit this was long. ive read the first 2 parts yesterday but not the other parts but it was an overall good piece. your emotion is always good. you gay nah lol, but anyway it was all good you had a good imagery in this one it wasn't a random type of poem this time so it really was getting at me, i was feeling this a lot nice vocab as well very interesting stucture as well..

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