Voted For: criminal

this battle was weak as hell for real. but i'm leave my opinion anyway. both of you need to work on all aspects of your lyrical styles for real. without a shadow of a doubt.
but criminal actually took this one.
don't get it twisted you both had really....really wack verses but criminal managed to pull through this battle.
this verse lacked hard hitting punches, decent vocab, and there was seriously weak wordplay from him. but this was still better than the quality-less verse from MC.
i couldn't find any decent aspect about his rhyme and on top of that his structure was really off.
In fact this is the main thing that swung my favour in criminals way cos content wise, neither of you had winning material.
Anyway. Criminal had the very slightly better verse so he gets this win.

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