yo homie this shyt was koo just the "//" was bugging feel me!but the structurre was kind of off but thats koo the rhymin couple of linez was off!thr rhyming scheme was alright,long az fck the multiz just werent there,and the vocab want there either but thi wa an alright piece!
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