Voted For: jmsbnd07655

you know what its kinda weird cos even though astound's verse was set up with a much better structure i was really feeling jms' verse a lot more. the personals werent there but the punch:

This guy gets caught with queers claimin “I jus’ called for a chat!”/

^^^that shit was funny as hell for real. probably the best line in the entire battle.

both of you need to elevate with your wordplay and vocab as the lack of the two made this battle seem too basic and simple.
astound's punches weren't hittin at all, they weren't very good, but i ain't gonna say you're wack cos you might be just gettin nito the swing of things cos i noticed you were new here.
but seriously you two BOTH need to elevate.

But im gonna vote for jms cos i thought his punches were a whole lot funnier and not as poor.

no hate though